Monday, August 24, 2009

Hannah Montana's Lucky Show

Room 6 have all been writing stories about a pop star,or if we were the pop stars. This is the beginning of my story. I hope you like it.

Hannah Montana woke up from a deep sleep. She felt like crabs were in her throat and she also had pins and needles in her feet. "Hannah, breakfast!"shouted Billy Ray. She ran downstairs as he was cracking eggs and putting it into a glass.

Hannah Montana ran into her dressing room wondering what to wear. She got a gold top,black skinny jeans and black high heel shoes. While she was in the white limo she got served champagne and a feast. She felt terrified of what was going to happen.


  1. What a great start to your story! I can't wait to hear what Hannah Montana gets up to - this could be even better than the movie!

  2. amazing!
    how did do all of that?
    you have lots of adjectives and descriptive language.

  3. thank you MM for your lovely comment.its really easy you just think about what you really want to say and you write you write your fantabulous idea down.

  4. Hi Belinda keep checking my story and hopefully I will finish it.

  5. Hi R.S, I loved you'r story! From K.S.